From the style academy assignments I was
introduced to and reminded of flaws in my sentence and paragraph structuring.
Our first assignment was to practice combining short individual thoughts into
complex or more complete sentences. From this exercise I realized how
unprofessional and unedited short choppy sentences appear and sound when
reading them aloud. I also recognized how easy it is to create a run-on
sentence and so correct punctuation is very significant. The challenge to
combine the separated thoughts into seven sentences proved how simple and
beneficial to your paper correcting and editing sentences can be. The imitation
exercise was a foreign concept to me at first, but then I realized that all writing
has a muse or a model to pattern ones writings from. I for one recognize that
when writing a talk for church I tend to pattern my talk from the talks spoken
in general conference, as far as my terminology and tone of voice are
concerned. The assignment in and of itself was more challenging than I had
initially anticipated. Trying to keep the structure of the sentence the same
but come up with a completely original thought to base it off of was difficult.
This made me realize why plagiarism is so dangerous; if someone already said it
so well, it’s difficult to come up with a better and original way to put it. I
think these exercises are relatable in my own writing because they brought my attention
to points of good writing that I hadn’t considered before or do not frequently
consider. The concept of attempting to enhance the quality of writing through
creating strong and meaningful sentences and through using the skill of
imitation to generate creative qualities in a paper is the two meanings of the
exercises that I learned. Even from writing this reflection I have been more
aware of my sentence structure and punctuation. I also recognized the tone of voice
in my head while writing the response which felt somewhat like the writings
from a review from a product or article where opinion is backed up with
examples and facts.
Isn't it interesting how different each writers voice is while the tone can be nearly identical? I agree to the difficulty of imitation at first.
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